Untitled Poem II
Curtains drawn aside,
Sunlight streaming in the day,
A shard of bright light,
Screaming the dark away.
Coming alive,
Leading the way,
Misty paths, I hope,
They clear before it's too late.
Colours, they start to fade,
Smudging fine lines, traces,
Stabbed & left for dead.
Drained out the life,
Nothing I would trade,
Nothing to last.
Colours, they run,
Stained in a parallel past.
Confused and lost, and then,
An ashen face,
I thought back to when,
I'd betrayed myself.
All the time spent,
In Nothingsville,
My ears I had lent,
Taught myself to lie.
Scissor edged reality,
Cutting through,
A paper thin mirage,
A wish to come true,
Hope nothing gives way,
Thoughts whisked away,
Haunting faces, places,
From my memory erases.
It's time to depart..... To fade away.....
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(No! I am not troubled & my heart does not ache... You may now go back to playing with your respective blow-up dolls...)
16 Comments:
whoa..no WHOA!! i read it like 3 times.. man u sure know how to give someone a complex..not even quotin which lines i like coz that wud mean it all.. damn cool work man.. finally someone who thinks like me..lol. take care
oh i LOVE the pic ..copied it..lol don care if u sew me
Nice! It just keeps getting better and darker dun'it? :)
lol why did u mention the last line?
i dont understand poetry. gulab jamuns arvind?
Scissor edged reality? Write poems about food...maybe I'll get it?
Foodie Sow
@ Rini - Haha!
I'm overwhelmed... But to be frank, I just went beserk writing those lines..
& go ahead and copy the pic..
I'll 'SEW' you alright.. I'll 'SEW' you good! :P
@ Just me - Thanks! :)
& well, yes! It does get darker.. But I've unsuccessfully tried so hard to write about the pitter-patter of raindrops on rose petals and something gay like that, but something takes a sharp turn somewhere, the clouds grey & smoeone dies all of a sudden.. :P
I'm just not cut out to write nice sappy stuff I guess..
@ Sups - Oh don't lie..
You do have a blow-up doll don't you?? ;)
@ Parvathi - There are a lot of things in this world you don't understand my child.. Lol..
& Yeah! The gulab jamuns were awesome! Thanks a ton! :)
@ Sow - Food poetry?
Hmmm... As interesting as the thought might seem, I'm doubly sure you just will not understand that either..
So just shush & tell me that you thought it was fantastic even if you didn't understand a shred of poetry.. :P
arghhhhhhhhh.. i meant sue u didnt have to make fun of me u meano :(
good poetry.....!!
but the last last lines spoiled the "dark" effect..!!
oh my sweet lordddd...u r beginning to depress me young man!
@ Rini-
Har Har!! *evil laughter*
I'm sooper mean.. I run around the streets armed with a rusty pair of scissors stabbing random people!
@ Rama -
Thanks! Well, you can't have the cake and eat it too right?
Actually you can! But you know what I mean... :P
@ anki -
Oh My!!
Do not blame my 'depressing' poetry if you have personal issues.. :P
Do forward the suicide note to me though.. I would like a draft of the format... Just in case I need it sometime. Lol..
meow:)
meow:)
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